Iv went though the Buildings.txt and the Specials.txt and made a lot of modifications to the English string table. Iv improved some of the grammer, fixed some punctuation and spelling here and there as well as removed extra spaces and simplified some of the descriptions. (specifcying "Target Health" insted of just "Health" seems to be extra words that are implied I think). Iv also capitalized anything that is a stat. Iv gone though half the tech tree making corrections also. I also moved the meat first to the specials.
Imperial Palace, Megalith, Concentration Camps, Industrial Farms, Black Hole Power Generator, Tectonic Instability, High Axial Tilt, Very Slow Rotation and Tidally Locked Rotation all have newly introduced spelling or grammatical errors, or are worded much more awkwardly than before. There are also a few other descriptions that have retained grammatical errors or missing words, but those aren't really your fault...
Genome bank contains a sentence in the fluff which explains vaguely what the building does, and seems out of place now that its effect is fully described above.
I don't know if this is due to your edit or eleazar's, but many of the descriptions don't flow as well if the order of the meat and the fluff is simply reversed; for instance, starting the Space Elevator description with "The supply meter of the planet which contains this building is tripled" doesn't sound very good - much better is something like "Triples Supply on the planet on which it is built." Gaia Transformation is another building with this problem, probably among others, and in the case of Solar Orbital Generator, the description barely makes sense anymore. (Also, you didn't capitalize "supply" in this description - was that deliberate? There are also many other cases of this.)
Collective Thought Network says:
"Increases... research on Planets with the Research focus by one and a half."
And lastly, the sole purpose of Construction in the game at the moment is to increase resource supply length. This is why all the things that affect construction say (or rather, said) "Increases/decreases max resource supply range by X."